Blood is thicker than water

1)      Thesis statement

How true is the saying ‘blood is thicker than water`? Since the olden days, it had portrayed been well pr their parents or family do care a lot for their children. In the dailies, we can see that there is a lot of news regarding love among family members. It is the nature of life that parents will love and never give up on their children no matter what happen.

2)      Body Paragraph 1

Topic sentence: Ali misunderstood his parents.

A.    Because of his parents were busy in their work, this lead to lack of care from their parents.

B.     As his parents were busy, he mingled around with his friends.

C.     He thought that only friends can avoid him from loneliness.

3)      Body Paragraph 2

Topic sentence: Ali started to mix around with friends from illegal society.

A.    He started to smoke

B.     He started to drink

C.     He started to commit crime

D.    He started to take drug

4)      Body Paragraph 3

Topic sentence: Ali became a suspect for police in a few crime cases.

A.    His parents stay with him

B.     His friends left him alone

C.     His father found him the best lawyer.

5)      Conclusion

He understood the saying blood is thicker than water. He furthers his studies in law.